Archive for the ‘Writing’ Category

The Phantom Tollbooth – Words of Wisdom

Saturday, April 13th, 2013

More than any other book I read as a child, The Phantom Tollbooth (1961) by Norton Juster  gave me a love of words– it puns them, pushes them, and explodes their meaning. It’s overflowing with inventiveness: the man who is short, tall, thin and fat, at the same time; the orchestra that plays colours; the city that disappears because nobody cares. And I love the illustrations by Jules Feiffer, especially this faceless timewaster (pictured), The Trivium, who has a message for all writers:

What could be more important than doing unimportant things? … There’s always something to do to keep you from what you really should be doing.

The Phantom Tollbooth is about a child’s quest to overcome boredom. It’s told with imagination, wit and wisdom — what more could you want in a children’s book?

 I had been an odd child: quiet, introverted and moody. Little was expected from me. Everyone left me alone to wander around inside my own head. When I grew up I still felt like that puzzled kid — my thoughts focused on him, and I began writing about his childhood.

Children are still the same as they’ve always been. They still get bored and confused, and still struggle to figure out the important questions of life. – Norton Juster

Basic Writing Mistake

Monday, April 8th, 2013

I made a basic mistake in the draft of my latest junior novel. I tried to create mystery and suspense by withholding information from the reader. Result: boredom, confusion and a plot that has no early grip. The Hitchcock Principle is that you create suspense by showing the audience as much as you can. He gives a movie example of two characters talking at a table for 15 rather dull minutes then a bomb blows them up – the scene provides a mere 15 seconds of surprise. But if we see the bomb under their table from the very start of the scene – it provides 15 minutes of suspense. I’ve now edited my opening chapters, introducing the central problem in the first pages, and moving a ‘surprise’ (from late in the book) up to Chapter 1.

As soon as the character engages with the problem, narrative tension starts.  This tension is the dynamic of the story; it’s the energy that pushes the story on its journey. – Norman Bilborough

5 Perfect Endings

Tuesday, March 26th, 2013

A great final sentence can offer hope,  provoke a smile or a chill, be wise or witty. At its best, it encapsulates the whole work. Where are these brilliant last lines from?

“Hey, Boo.”  (novel)

“Nobody’s perfect!” (movie)

“Overhead, without any fuss, the stars were going out.” (short story)

“There is a crack in everything, it’s where the light gets in.” (song)

“All mimsy were the borogroves, and the mome raths outgrabe.” (poem)

 

Picture: Tenniel’s borogroves (Victorian Web).

Best Titles For Children

Monday, March 4th, 2013

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Choosing a title is the fun stage of writing a book. The hard work over, I spend hours happily test-driving pithy, bizarre or lyrical titles. The great children’s titles describe some aspect of the book (plot, setting, character, etc) in utterly striking language. My favourites titles are: A Swiftly Tilting Planet; The Stupid’s Die; and of my own, a book of cautionary rhymes titled, Global Norman. Here are some classic titles of children’s literature:

* Character: Oliver Twist, Shrek, The Halfmen of O, Hairy Maclary from Donaldson’s Dairy, Flat Stanley

* Plot: Millions of Cats,  Journey To The Centre of the Earth, The Shrinking of Treehorn

*SettingOutside Over There, The Horror of Hickory Bay, The Black Island

*Theme: To Kill A Mockingbird, Something Wicked This Way Comes, Roll of Thunder Hear My Cry

* Joke: War and Peas, Squids Will Be Squids, Green Eggs and Ham

a swiftly tilting planet cover

Writing is will and imagination

Wednesday, January 16th, 2013

The first step towards being a writer is to hitch your unconscious mind to your writing arm.– Dorothea Brande

The 1934 classic Becoming a Writer, by Dorothea Brande, is a practical book which is remarkably in tune with current brain science. Brande believes the writer’s unconscious mind should ‘flow freely and richly, bringing at demand all the treasures of memory’, while the conscious mind does the hard word work to  ‘control, combine and discriminate’.

Photo: Moria cave, Karamea

Writing is will and imagination; it depends both on unbidden impulses and on careful, considered dedication to the tools of language. Malcolm Bradbury

But the unconscious can be a reluctant creature, resisting the discipline that writing requires. Brande has some intriguing exercises to achieve the interaction between will and imagination. Here are three exercises designed to ‘tap’ the unconscious:

  • Writing immediately after you wake up  before any associations invade the mind (I feel the resistance already).
  • Writing at a prearranged time every day.
  • Meditation to improve clarity (this fits with current neuroscience ideas).

Brande  also suggests our unconscious is the source of our most original stories, and most importantly, that every writer has something unique to offer:

There is just one contribution which every  one of us can make: we can give into the common pool of experience some comprehension of the world as it looks to each of us.

Photo: morning, Lake Alexandrina.

 

Tolkien Biography

Sunday, December 30th, 2012

The Hobbit and The Lord of the Rings are the work of an obscure Oxford professor whose specialisation was the West Midland dialect of Middle English, and who lived an ordinary suburban life bringing up his children and tending his garden. – Humphrey Carpenter

My holiday reading is Humphrey Carpenter’s wonderful book, J.R.R. Tolkien – A Biography.  The account of his early life is quite moving, and the evolution of his stories is fascinating (as Tolkien said, “Stories tend to get out of hand”). Some quirky influences on his writing include:

  • The attack on the toddler Tolkien by a terrifying tarantula in South Africa (1895),
  • Tolkien’s language teacher who trained his dog (to lick its lips) with a Gothic command, “smakka bagms”,
  • His ‘fellowship’ of young writers at college which is broken by the Great War.
  • The vital inspiration of the Kalevala, (Land of Heroes), the mythology of Finland.
  • A trip to a ‘nasty little suburban resort’ where he wrote a poem about a slimy cave creature named ‘Glip’ (1922).
  • His friendship with C.S.Lewis, on whom he based Treebeard’s ‘hrooming’ voice.

The Hobbits are just rustic English people. – Tolkien

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Link to all the Lord of the Rings covers.

5 Inspiring Websites

Sunday, November 11th, 2012

1. Common Dreams: news articles on social, economic, rights issues (mostly US).

2. Utne Reader: best of the alternative press on environment, culture, community.

3. Brain Pickings: nicely curated blog on creativity and culture.

4. Letters of Note: fascinating personal letters from famous people.

5. Templeton: Big Questions Essay Series on science, morality, religion, economics.

 

Best of Flannery O’Connor

Tuesday, October 30th, 2012

Fiction should be both canny and uncanny.

The best short story I’ve ever read is Flannery O’Connor’s A Good Man Is Hard To Find, the opening story of an impressive collection. Her stories are dark, her characters grotesque, but there’s always a thin redemptive thread – in the title story it’s found in the unlikely shape of a psychopath called The Misfit. Brad Gooch’s detailed biography, Flannery, reveals how O’Connor honed her stories to near perfection despite the pain of a disease (lupus) which killed her at the age of only 39. Her writing is infused with a tough spirituality (she was Catholic) but she never sacrifices the story for a message. The book Mystery and Manners is a wonderful collection of her essays and lectures – some favourite quotes:

If you want to write well and live well at the same time, you’d better arrange to inherit money.

When I sit down to write, a monstrous reader looms up who sits down beside me and continually mutters, ‘I don’t get it, I don’t see it, I don’t want it.

Fiction is about everything human and we are made of dust, and if you scorn getting dusty, then you shouldn’t write fiction.

There’s a certain grain of stupidity that the fiction writer can hardly do without and this is the quality of having to stare, of not getting to the point at once.

As grace and nature have been separated, so imagination and reason have been separated, and this always means an end to art. The artist uses his reason to discover an answering reason in everything he sees.

The writer has to judge himself with a stranger’s eye and a stranger’s severity.

The Catholic novelist doesn’t have to be a saint; he doesn’t even have to be a Catholic; he does, unfortunately, have to be a novelist.

 

Self Editing – 3 Essential Books

Thursday, October 25th, 2012

Anyone can write but editing must be learned. One of the masters of the finely wrought story was P.G. Wodehouse; a relentless editor, he polished his manuscripts to comic perfection. Douglas Adams (in The Salmon of Doubt) described Wodehouse’s unique system:

‘When he was writing a book he used to pin pages in undulating waves around the wall. Pages he thought were working well would be pinned high, and those that still needed work would be lower down the wall.’

The aim was to get the whole story up to the ceiling level. What ever your system, a little ‘ruthless efficiency’ is required. Here are 3 books that have helped me:

Self Editing For Fiction Writers by Renni Browne and Dave King: Teaches the mechanics of style: dialogue, point of view, ‘show not tell’, character, beats etc. Best of all it gives examples, checklists and a self-test at the end of each topic.

The writer must be as God in his universe — present everywhere and visible nowhere. -Flaubert

The Art of Writing by John Gardner: A more stringent book but motivating. Gardner talks about maintaining the ‘dream’ of the story – but when the writing draws attention to itself (in a bad way) then the dream is broken for the reader.

Go over and over it…refusing to let anything stay if it looks awkward, phony, or forced.– John Gardner

On Becoming a Writer by Dorothea Brande (1934) is based on the idea that that the writer is both artist and self-critic. Brande believes we should begin with the unconscious mind ‘bringing at demand all the treasures of memory’, while the conscious mind ‘must control, combine and discriminate’.

But in the end don’t be too hard on yourself. The writer Jacob Needleman thanked his editor for going his book ‘with a flaming sword in one hand and a sweet-sounding bell in the other.’

The Remarkable Gimmal

Monday, October 1st, 2012

I was introduced to the wonderful Gimmal by the poet, Zireaux. He invented this Thurberesque term to describe a rhyming pair, such as hero and zero. What makes the Gimmal so rare? There are no other English words to rhyme with the pair, and the words are related in meaning.

Like two siblings, or twins who’ve been separated at birth and who, reunited again, cast new light upon the other’s existence. – Zireaux

Here are a few more specimens that Zireaux has netted:

summit – plummet; tortured – orchard;

eager – meager; cupid – stupid

I met the Gimmal by chance, rhyming minister with sinister in a poem. It’s the meaning of Gimmals that’s so intriguing – one word is somehow the subversive opposite of the other. Where do these entwined twins come from? If you find a Gimmal, send it to Zireaux, who will give it a home in the collection (a zickering of Gimmals perhaps?).

But I’m convinced the greatest gimmal match is

the violence that one’s silence hatches.– Zireaux

Tortured Orchard (Pont Aven)

A world where things come right

Monday, July 23rd, 2012

‘There are moments, Jeeves, when one asks oneself, “Do trousers matter?”’

‘The mood will pass, sir.’

P.G. Wodehouse (WOOD-house) created a world without earthquakes, wars or dictators (except Roderick Spode whose ‘eye that could open an oyster at sixty paces’), where nothing mattered except tidy trousers and nothing broke except engagements. He was a brilliant writer who cooked up similes like a master chef:

His legs wobbled like asparagus stalks.

She looked like a tomato struggling for self-expression.

Her face was shining like the seat of a bus-driver’s trousers.

Her voice trailed away in a sigh that was like the wind blowing through the cracks in a broken heart.

Wodehouse published 90 books, writing until his death at 93 years. When asked about his technique he said ‘I just sit at a typewriter and curse a bit’. My favourite is Right Ho, Jeeves, about Bertie Wooster and his valet, Jeeves, who is ‘so dashed competent in every respect’. The chapter where  Gussie Fink-Nottle presents the prizes at a private school is a brilliant piece of humour.

Exceptional style, and the sheer joy of stories which offer a world where things come right.– Sophie Ratcliffe (Wodehouse, Letters)

The theme that animates Wodehouse’s work … is the quest for sweetness and light in the daily transactions of humanity.– Robert McCrum (Wodehouse: A Life)

Stephen Fry’s tribute to P.G. Wodehouse.

 

How to write like E. B. White

Thursday, June 28th, 2012

White wrote only three children’s books and two are the most popular of all time in the US (Charlotte’s Web and Stuart Little). What was his secret? Imagination, yes, but he also took his time and revised a lot. Charlotte is short but it took two years to write the first draft, then another year to rewrite it. It has the best opening line of any children’s book I’ve read (“Where’s Papa going with that axe?”); and perhaps the greatest, most heart-rending ending. (And those rustic Garth Williams illustrations).

It has taken 25 years for me to be able to contemplate this book with relative equanimity. I see now that the ending is as beautiful, bold and full of integrity as Charlotte herself.– Lucy Mangan

In a fine interview (Paris Review) White puts a delightful spin on writers’ procrastination :

Delay is natural to a writer. He is like a surfer—he bides his time, waits for the perfect wave on which to ride in. He waits for the surge (of emotion? of strength? of courage?) that will carry him along. I am apt to let something simmer for a while in my mind before trying to put it into words. I walk around, straightening pictures on the wall, rugs on the floor—as though not until everything in the world was lined up and perfectly true could anybody reasonably expect me to set a word down on paper.

Best opening sentence quiz

Friday, June 22nd, 2012

Never open a book with weather.– Elmore Leonard

The best openings begin with a character and take the reader captive almost immediately. My examples come from children’s books, the very best being the opening of Charlotte’s Web by E. B. White which deftly introduces character, setting, and tension to grab the imagination.

“Where’s Papa going with that axe?’ said Fern to her mother as they were setting the table for breakfast.

“Out to the hoghouse…”

Test Yourself

Match these classic opening sentences with the titles below.

1. All children, except one, grow up.

2. There was a boy called Eustace Clarence Scrubb, and he almost deserved it.

3.The Iron Man came to the top of the cliff.

4. Here I am, Ralph William Mountfield, banished to my bedroom on Christmas Day.

5. Keith the boy in the rumpled shorts and shirt, did not know he was being watched as he entered Room 215 of the Mountain View Inn.

6. My father is put in the stocks again! Oh! the injustice of it!

7. When Old Tip lost his bark, Uncle Trev had to teach his horse to bark and chase the cows up to the shed for milking.

8. It’s a funny thing about mothers and fathers. Even when their own child is the most disgusting little blister you could ever imagine, they still think that he or she is wonderful.

Titles: The Iron Man, The Voyage of the Dawn Treader, The Mouse and the Motorcycle, Devil-in-the-Fog, Matilda, The More the Merrier, Uncle Trev, Peter Pan

Give your readers as much information as possible as soon as possible. Readers should have such complete understanding of what is going on … that they could finish the story themselves, should cockroaches eat the last few pages.– Kurt Vonnegut

Maurice Sendak – Outside Over There

Wednesday, May 9th, 2012

That touch of reality in a child’s life is a child’s comfort. The child gets the sense that this person who wrote this book knows about me and knows the world can be a troubling, incomprehensible place. Maurice Sendak

One of the world’s most treasured children’s book creators, Maurice Sendak, has died, aged 83 years. For me, his picture book Outside Over There is the essence of Sendak – haunting, comforting, uncompromising –  nobody else combined the real and the unreal so brilliantly. In a rare interview, Maurice Sendak talked about how his stories reflect ‘childhood as a very passionate, upsetting, silly, comic business’.  Outside Over There is a  tale of separation and siblings that features a creepy ice baby (pictured). Sendak’s books can also be exuberant (In the Night Kitchen) and even spiritual (Dear Mili). On teaching writing Sendak said:

I stress character, character, character. And for authors to go where you want; go where you will. Children will go everywhere.

Creativity, Google and Mad Men

Friday, March 23rd, 2012

The imagination of the good artist or thinker produces continuously good, mediocre, and bad things, but his judgment, trained and sharpened to a fine point, rejects, selects, connects… All great artists and thinkers [are] great workers, indefatigable not only in inventing, but also in rejecting, sifting, transforming, ordering. Nietzsche

Imagine, a new book by Jonah Lehrer – author of Proust was a Neuroscientist – is about creativity and the brain. Lehrer believes that creativity is our natural state and, like Neitzsche, he stresses the role of synthesising:

The synthesizing mind takes information from disparate sources, understands and evaluates that information objectively, and puts it together in ways that make sense… the capacity to synthesize becomes ever more crucial as information continues to mount at dizzying rates.

Perhaps synthesising is another word for the endless mulling, rewriting and editing that writers go through. David Ogilvy was one of the original 1960s ‘ad men’ referenced in TV’s Mad Men. He described the creative process of writing advertising copy as ‘a slow and laborious business’ of redrafting and editing (read his full letter here).

Does the ‘dizzying’ internet make us more creative? In a fascinating essay about the brain and computers, Jim Holt argues that while the internet sharpens many cognitive skills, it may be the enemy of creativity. The problem is that the web can be distracting (rather than reflective) for the brain and it barely engages with deeper levels of thought. Holt calls Google a ‘memory prosthesis’. That might be true but it does make synthesising a blog a lot of fun.

Talent develops in tranquility. Goethe

More: editing; and writing and computers

 

Writing Sci-Fi: Beginnings

Tuesday, February 14th, 2012

Once you have decided which aspect of your story is care about most then it’s a good idea to signal this from the very beginning. Orson Scott Card suggests beginning with a question for the reader. A question does two things: it creates tension and it creates a desire to know the answer.

The beginning must make the reader ask questions that are answered by the stories ending. – Orson Scott Card

Examples from different aspects of story:

  • Milieu: Begin with the arrival of a stranger who asks “What makes this place tick?”
  • Idea: Begin with a mystery, such as ‘Whodunnit?’ or ‘Why is weird stuff happening?’
  • Character: Begin with a character asking ‘How can I change?’
  • Event:  Begin with a character asking ‘How can I survive this/save the world?’.

Ray Bradbury is good at posing questions in the opening of his short stories. A Sound of Thunder begins with an explorer asking “Does this [time] safari guarantee I come back alive?”. The ending provides a satisying answer– ‘you will come back alive but you’ll wish you hadn’t.’

Writing Sci-Fi: Structure

Friday, February 10th, 2012

In his wonderful book How to Write Science Fiction and Fantasy (p.76), novelist Orson Scott Card says all stories contain 4 basic aspects: Milieu, Idea, Character and Event (MICE!). Here are some sci-fi examples (YA):

  • Milieu: about a world or a society. Eg. Running Out of Time by Margaret Haddix about time travel to a past society.
  • Idea: begins with a mystery to answer. Eg. Protus Rising by Ken Catran, murder mystery in space.
  • Character: about character transformation. Eg.The House of Scorpion by Nancy Farmer about a clone who develops values.
  • Event: when something goes wrong in the world. Eg. Box by Penelope Todd about an epidemic that strikes New Zealand.

Which aspect of the story matters most to you? That is the aspect that will give you the story’s structure. – Orson Scott Card

Hergé– Wind of Inspiration

Wednesday, February 1st, 2012

You must marry the wind of inspiration with the bone of graphic clarity.– Chang Chong-Jen.

The Adventures of Herge is a must for Tintin geeks although not for children. It’s a Hergé (George Remi) biography done in the ‘clear line’ style of a Tintin comic book. Hergé fell in love with drawing in 1914 when his mother gave him some pencils to ‘calm him down’. The book is a fascinating insight into the influences on Hergé and the political and emotional difficulties he faced, especially during wartime working under the Nazis. Most moving of all is the story of his friendship with Chang Chong-Jen (which inspired Tintin in Tibet). Chang helped him refine his beliefs and drawing style. Before reading this book it might help to know a bit about Hergé, or to read the appendix first. Download a 5 page sample of the comic book here.

Writing Sci-Fi: Traps

Friday, January 27th, 2012

I’m writing a sci-fi novel and falling into two traps: Infodump and Unobtainium. Infodump is a when a character gives a mini lecture — telling instead of showing — usually in reply to “Tell me, Professor, how does your invention work?” Infodump can be reduced by editing out techno-babble; and by using characters to give brief explanations only when plot demands it.

Unobtainium is a plot device such as an alien substance or a future technology. Most sci-fi has them but too often they’re used to magic away a plot problem, as in ‘Lucky I brought my sonic screwdriver to do this impossible task.’ (see also ‘Any sufficiently advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic’– Arthur C Clarke). Possible solutions: make your ‘Unobtainium’ central to the plot (give it a cool back-story); or reduce it to a playful veneer of science. The characters in TV’s Fringe play nimbly with real science:

The Art of Writing

Friday, January 6th, 2012

Thoughts from The Importance of Living, by Lin Yutang (1938), Chinese writer and inventor.

Writing is good or bad depending on its charm and flavour, or lack of them. For this charm there can be no rules. Charm rises from one’s writing as a cloud rises from a hill-top…

Every word has a life and a personality. A writer always has an instinctive interest in words.

There is a period of gestation of ideas before writing… when a writer rushes into print before his ideas go through this gestation, that is diarrhoea, mistaken for birth-pains.

Writing is but the expression of one’s own nature or character… style is not a method, a system or even a decoration; it is but the total impression that the reader gets of the quality of the writer’s mind.

A writer in the ‘familiar’ style speaks in an unbuttoned mood. He completely exposes his weaknesses, and is therefore disarming.

The great scholar, Ouyang Hsiu, confessed to ‘three ons’ for doing his best writing: on the pillow, on horseback and on the toilet.

A literary masterpiece is like a stretch of nature itself, well-formed in its formlessness, and its charm and beauty come by accident.

Imagination

Tuesday, December 13th, 2011

… A book needs us desperately. We have to pull it off the shelf. We have to open it up. We have to turn the pages, one by one. We even have to use our imagination to make it work. So, suddenly, that book is not just a book; it’s our book. Mo Willems (Why Books? essay)

The pictures are not very defined because one wants to be able to have the imagination playing over them. Quentin Blake (video)

Because they have so little, children must rely on imagination rather than experience. Eleanor Roosevelt

Photo: tree in Pont-Aven churchyard

Mission Impossible

Sunday, November 20th, 2011

Every writer I know has trouble writing. – Joseph Heller

Confession: I play 1960s TV themes while I write. Mission Impossible is the best:

A pale car stops alongside a dingy desk. A writer gets out, unlocks the desk and takes out a laptop. His mission, should he decide to accept, is to release a novel from captivity. Should the plot fail, he will disavow any knowledge of the effort and his career will self-destruct in five rejections. The writer opens a file and selects likely characters: a trickster, a tough guy, a feisty female. After a planning session the plot is all action. The set-up is smooth, tension rises, but everything falls apart near the end. A contrived twist saves the novel (endings are difficult).

The dynamic theme to Mission Impossible is by Argentine composer, Lalo Schiffrin. This artful video commercial portrays Schiffrin in the composing process.

A tenacious little book

Sunday, November 13th, 2011

The Grey Lady and the Strawberry Snatcher is a classic picture book that almost didn’t make it. It took Molly Bang years to create it and was repeatedly rejected by publishers. They said it was ‘peculiar-looking’ and that ‘children won’t relate to an old woman as a protagonist’. The manuscript sat in a drawer for years then was re-worked. When it was finally published the reviews were pretty bad writes Molly Bang: ‘The New York Times that said that the weird-looking characters and flashy colors were an indication that I was part of the drug culture and the detailed pictures told no real story but were merely an excuse to show off.’ Then it won a Caldecott award and everything changed. Why? Because it’s a one-of-a-kind, off-the-wall book. And very creepy! I love the tiny fungi that grow where the Catcher has trod.

Zickering squtch

Wednesday, November 9th, 2011

I watch Thurber wrap his story tightly in words, while at the same time juggling fabulous words that glitter and gleam, tossing them out like a happy madman, all the time explaining and revealing and baffling with words. It is a miracle. Neil Gaiman

The Thirteen Clocks, by James Thurber, is 60 years old and remains fresh and sparkling. A teacher read it to the class when I was 10 and re-reading it now I was amazed that I could recall whole sentences. It’s a fairy tale parody about a prince who must perform impossible tasks to save a princess from an evil duke. The language is a riot of every device in the English language, plus many invented words (eg. ‘squtch’ and ‘the zickering of bats’). Look for the Ronald Searle illustrated version which has a brilliant bonus story, The Wonderful O, about a pirate who tries to ban the letter ‘o’ (because he had to push his mother out a porthole). Some choice Thurber sentences:

Thorns grew thick and thicker in a ticking thicket of bickering crickets.

Time is for dragonflies and angels. The former live too little and the latter live too long.

A peasant in a purple smock stalked the smoking furrows, sowing seeds.

Wells, Welles, wells

Sunday, October 30th, 2011

No one would have believed in the last years of the nineteenth century that this world was being watched…

So begins The War of the Worlds by H.G.Wells (1898) perhaps the most influential of all sci-fi stories. Wells gave the world its extraterrestrial consciousness and opened dramatic wells that produced countless alien books and movies (and inspires my writing today) . On this day in 1938, Orson Welles news-style broadcast of TWOTW  on American radio had many thinking it was an invasion, if not by the Martians then the Germans. (Listen to a clip from this clever radio report). The style was much copied: in Christchurch in the late 1940s, a radio station broadcast that a UFO had landed in Hagley Park, causing people to flock to the park. H.G.Wells once met Orson Wells and recorded this interview. And I like the TWOTW musical with Richard Burton’s cool narration.

Picture by Alvim Corréa, TWOTW 1906 ed.

Pigling Brains

Monday, July 25th, 2011

‘Tell all the Truth but tell it slant. Emily Dickinson

There’s talk of compulsory laptops and iPads for primary schools, but evidence suggests that books should be the priority for children. A good novel is more likely to engage the brain than a screen. Reading is a ‘neuronally and intellectually circuitous act’ (Maryanne Wolf) – or to put it another way, a novel encourages the reader’s brain to be active in the construction of the story. Wolf also argues that more indirect the writing the more enriching it is for the brain.

Clive James comments on this (in Cultural Amnesia) in his essay celebrating the eloquence of Beatrix Potter. He recalls how his own children were fascinated by slant and mysterious phrases such as ‘eight conversation peppermints with appropriate moral sentiments’ and ‘Alexander was volatile’ in The Tale of Pigling Bland (one of the great character names). James concludes that

Children like to hear good things said a thousand times.

Book People

Tuesday, July 19th, 2011

Alone we are one drop, together we are an ocean Ryunosuke Satoro

Honey bees are a super-organism: each one working for the health of the whole. In the same way many people contribute to a book. At the writer’s end: family, friends, writing group, experts, research subjects. At the publishers: editor, proof-reader, designer, publicist, education coordinator, accountant. In the world: distributors, retailers, reviewers, website designer, media, networkers and most importantly, readers. Readers are the book’s power — an unread book will wither like a hive without a queen.

Photo: Swarm by Sarah Anderson

Reading Changes Us

Tuesday, July 5th, 2011

Proust and the Squid by Maryanne Wolf is a remarkable book that explains how reading deepens our thinking. Brain plasticity enables us to learn to read – the brain creates new pathways and these then become the basis for new, innovative thinking. Reading and thinking enhance each other:

…the rich associations, inferences, and insights emerging from this capacity allow us to reach beyond the specific context of what we read to form new thoughts.

Wolf wonders if this ‘constructive heart’ of reading will be weakened by computers which favour shallow thinking – read The Shallows. All this suggests that primary schools should invest in excellent libraries, before getting laptops for every child. Wolf also looks in micro-detail at the skills a child needs to learn to read. It’s a challenge but there’s something we can do to help, Wolf concludes:

The amount of time the child spends listening to parents and other loved ones read continues to be one of the best predictors of later reading.

New Bee Book

Friday, July 1st, 2011

My new honey bee novel  for children, Wings, is launched today. It grew from a couple of seeds: the pesticide threat to bees and a fascination with giant hornets (it was almost titled ‘Hornet’). While writing, I learned a lot about character ‘balance’ – they do take on their own life, but you need to nudge them now and them. I had fun with the nasty hornet (Torgo), the loopy acid-bee (Ash), and a puzzle snake (Fang). Hardest part was deciding about the death of a character. I’ve tried to create a gripping tale; and trusting in the power of story (okay, and a good editor) I hope readers will see bees in a new light.

…when reading takes place, that individual brain is forever changed, both physiologically and intellectually. Maryanne Wolf

The Edge of Physics

Saturday, May 14th, 2011

The four fundamental forces of writing – Imagine, Write, Edit, Hope –  harmonize with nicely with the four known forces of nature:

1. Electromagnetism: gives us our world of molecules; and like Imagination it has infinite range.

2.  Weak force: is confined to nuclei of atoms; like a Writer confined with a story.

3.  Strong force: holds atomic nuclei together; as Editing gives a story strength.

4. Gravity: like Hope, it keeps us anchored and also has infinite range.

I find physics challenging but I enjoyed The Edge of Physics by  Anil Ananthaswamy – it illuminates tricky ideas and amazes with a tour of grand physics experiments in the uttermost parts of the world.